Neglected By, Molly Mellott
A shriek of agony,
Heard but not seen
A cry for help,
Ripping at the seams
"The Ugly" is like her disease
Scoffed and smirked at
By plastic royalty
There's a light within her naive heart
Few who see it
But she still yearns to be noticed
Neglected for life
Only a mirror image matters
Shipped off on her own
Known as an outsider
Monday, April 4, 2011
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Like I said before, get rid of the 'like' in the second stanza. Also you should put the first stanza after the third- it'd make more sense. I like-y though!!
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